we showed out media production to a group of friends.

we recored them giving ther opinions about it using our mobile phones, we uploaded it to the computer then embed it onto our blogg.

By having audience feed back we were able to see what was good about and it we could do to improve it .

The outcom of the showing was really good, they saw the our mot and it was gd,

there was positive and negative effects.

after this we decide to change certain saspects of our media production.

one person sed that some of the bits looked random we didnt reali make it clear as to what it was or how it linked with the prodution.

what we changed or add??

more people dancing nad holding the dance your cares away sign

taking about the bits were the girl is walking throung the school children and the people all sitting ang laughting. this didnt link in with our theme or dance ur cares away

it too long to get to the point about people havin pobs.